Archive for December 16, 2007

Introduction to my Page

Hi there people. I’m not much of a writer but I’ve got to say that when my time comes to put pen on paper I like to have my opinions clearly stated for my readers. This page is mainly free writing, essays, and other writing assignments I’ve been required to complete in my ENC 1101 class. I don’t like to linger too much on just one topic so you’ll find quite a diversity of things to read about. Hope you enjoy it or at least get something out of it. I’m very open minded so you’re more than welcome to leave me a comment stating your opinion. Ait’ hope you like!

My response to Alex Salina’s poem, Mango

I have to agree that although at first glance the poem seems to be a praise to the way the mango makes Salinas feel, looking back at it a second time my attention was caught by the following stanza…

I remember my body has temperatures.
Cool is the flesh of the mango
And my warmth trembles forth
Not without enamel pain
Not without a shirt stain
Yet the buds are fresh inside
I am eternal flesh

I interpreted this as meaning that like everything good in the world, it always has something bad to it. Although we wish the mango to be perfect in every way, Salinas seems to feel “enamel pain” because of the strong urge to have that mango that will cool his warm body. It also mentions the stain on the shirt. I don’t know about you but if I stained my white shirt while I ate a mango I’d be a little upset later on. I don’t know, maybe this is an example of the whole concept of love. Although Salinas mentions these two things, it doesnt seem to bother him. Much like when people say they’re in love… they always seem to overlook the little bad things and maybe even look forward to that little stain.

My final reflection on Ishmael, by: Daniel Quin

“Thank God I’m done with this book” is my first thought in reflecting upon it. To be honest the book had an interesting point to make and it was very true. However, this sounded way too philosophical for me and thats definetly not my favorite subject. What annoyed me about the book was the way it was so repetitive. I did however realize that Daniel Quin wrote that way on purpose. The student in the story constantly saying “I still don’t get it”, “but what does this have to do…”, “I’m getting there, give me a minute to think about it”. C’mon, to me this seemed like such a waste of reading time and irritating the monkey would then have to repeat itself in a different way or go back to something he mentioned earlier in the story. So why did Quin decide in his right mind to write this way? My opinion is that he wanted to depict humans as stupid creatures that take forever to really grasp a concept. This is probably the reason why the teacher happens to be a gorilla. Apparently this gorilla knows better than any other human how they should run their lives. Nice huh? He placed us inferior to a creature we believe ourselves to be more highly advanced than.

Also, Quiin drags out the entire story. The whole thing could probably be told in a short essay taking only a few pages and few minutes to read. But no, he decided to carry it out in 263 pages. It’s kinda like saying there won’t ever be an answer to fixing this whole mess we’ve put ourselves in… all we could do is refelct upon it. We can try figuring out how we came to be this way but like the student said, none of us is actually willing to truly live a “Leaver’s” life.

Another analytical thought was the death of Ishmael. Just when the student (i dun’t remember his name, or if he had one) was beginning to get closer (literally) to the gorilla (closest thing to nature that he comes to in the story) it just so happens that the goriila disappears because the rent hasnt been paid for the office space. That’s kinda like saying whenever humans get close to nature we tend to lose it without even realizing it. Just like the student tried going after Ishmael, searching for him everywhere and having to travel long distance just to see him, so do we have to go to the zoo or a crappy park to get a tiny bit closer to nature. but just the way ishmael was slowy dieing of pneumonia, so is the small amount of nature we have behind bars. We’ll only be able to diagnose what’s wrong with it when its too late and no matter how many shots (like ishmael) we put into its system, we’ll lose it.

The connection i did make about segregation was how the Takers think that just because they know good and evil, they think they know how to run people’s lives. Ishmael mentioned how Takers don’t care for “ways that can work” but for the “one right way that it can work” apparently different skin tones will be considered “ways” and being only white, blue eyed, tall, and male, is the “one right way”.

My Service Learning Reflection

Picking out weedsMe!Sweaty and Smelly           

When I first heard about the service-learning projects my immediate thought was “Oh great, something else I have to worry about for the next two years”. That all changed however, the day I volunteered in Overtown in the Roots In The City Project. I was surprised to see that although I’d heard and passed by Overtown a couple times, I had never actually stopped to take the time and take everything in. On Gandhi day I had the opportunity to do just that. I noticed the run down buildings in need of a good paint job and a couple of repairs. I also noticed the people walking in the streets. Some obviously under the influence of drugs, and others just looked troubled. I immediately realized how lucky I am to have all that I could ever want and need. It saddened me to know that there wasn’t much I could do to help this community. The garden however, made me reconsider that. Although I wasn’t making a huge difference in planting and picking up fresh greens, I was starting somewhere. I felt that this garden represented the heart of the town because technically it’s in the community’s center. Even though everywhere you look all you see is broken windows, forgotten beer bottles, and growing weeds, when you’re in the garden its like you’re in a completely different place. The garden is like an escape from the troubles society has created. At that point you’re connected with nature in a whole different level, a gardening level. It’s like an opportunity to start over by planting good things, fresh greens that have no way of doing anyone any harm. In this garden nature has allowed us to plant, take care, water, and grow something with our own hands. This garden gives hope to the Overtown residents as it shows them that there’s still something beautiful within this once great town. This garden represents something to keep working for because you can’t just leave a garden on its own. A garden must be cared for. That’s exactly what the people in Overtown need. Something to fight for and hope for. Hope for a better life, for freedom of oppression, drugs, violence, and poverty. We can open all the houses our pockets can pay for but they also need hope. I truly believe the garden gives just that. I would recommend that everyone at one point in their lives should volunteer in such a project. It’s good to get away from what you’re use to and experience what’s out there. It helps you become more conscious of your decisions and the way you treat other people. It’s also a good way to recognize that we all need help in some way and we are also all capable of lending a helping hand to those who need it. Volunteering there made me feel good. It helped me realize that seeking my own gain was stupid. I only have a short amount

of time on this earth and I don’t intend on living it selfishly. I now want to help and reach out to as many people in need as I

possibly can. I want my hard work to be worth something. Not for your everyday job in which you only care to get that raise or

bonus. But for that job that leaves behind a legacy, a change in the world for the better. In the end we are all connected in

some way. A great mind once said, “The earth is not ours, we are only borrowing it from our children”. I want my children, and

my children’s children to live in a world with equality, freedom, happiness, and love.   

Is Hip-Hop Dead?

Is Hip-Hop dead? It’s both a question and bold statement that has provoked controversial arguments within the music industry. Many have wondered what went wrong, while most simply ignore the decline of this once powerful movement. What seemed to be an original and innovative genre of music has now been reduced to a monotonous and repetitive quest for money, drugs, and women.To truly appreciate hip-hop music one should be well educated in its actual background. Where did hip-hop take root? Who were its followers? What controversies did it raise? Once you’ve got a good base on the whole hip-hop movement you realize that what it’s come up to has not only morphed into a completely different genre of music but it has also transformed into commercial garbage with the intention of gaining money. It is believed that the originator of hip-hop was a Jamaican Dj by the name of Kool Herc, in the late seventies. This was the time period that actually made real hip-hop music. Dj’s were eager to produce great new music sampled from funk and disco classics capable of sounding better than their competitions’. They would use samples of popular songs at the time while composing short rhymes, or “breaks” over every beat. To compose such pieces of music took talent and hard work. If you listen to the original hip-hop records you’ll notice its complexity, swiftness, and appreciate it as a form of art. The music was so captivating that it would attract the local masses at block parties and dance clubs.Now a day it’s different. You’ll notice that in today’s “hip-hop” it doesn’t take much talent or effort to come up with a song that sounds like every other song in the radio. All you have to do is add an effortless, gay dance move, praise the city you were born in, mention your own name a couple times (in case your listeners forget whose rapping because all of you sound the same), and of course find a way to get a video on MTV featuring an already famous “hip-hop” artists. Oh, and how can I forget, you also have to have half naked girls dancing all over you, begging to have a piece of your hot self.    Back when hip-hop was just making its way into the streets, each city had something new and original to contribute towards its movement. The urban youth found comfort in Hip-Hop and discovered new ways to express themselves through it. Because hip-hop’s original followers were mainly a part of the poor black community, the music explicated just that. It spoke about the hardships they would undergo in their everyday lives; drugs, police, relationships, gangs, etc. The music in other words gained popularity by its ability to make people feel as if they could relate to it. It was reality rewritten into a form of poetry. This did however, stir up controversy. Since the lyrical content of each rap had started to become products of the current environment, hip-hop was no longer confined to the party atmosphere, but to the streets. The crack epidemic had spread throughout the country, leaving poverty and chaos in its path. This was when hip-hop artists began producing more conscious rhymes, telling America the horrors of drugs and crime in the ghetto. Society of course than labeled hip-hop music as that of gang members because few failed to notice how every song had a strong positive message urging people to uplift themselves.In today’s hip-hop you see the exact opposite. Rappers actually encourage their young fans to get crunk (or crazy drunk), smoke weed, reach happiness on E (ecstasy), and take lines (coke). If teens don’t do as expected then according to today’s music they aren’t having a good time. During the early nineties, when the new television channel MTV began airing new hip-hop music videos, hip-hop had reached its peak and its popularity had began spreading world wide. That’s when big business corporations saw new opportunities to turn the Hip-Hop culture into cash. It was at this exact moment that hip-hop’s influence on society began to shifting in a new direction.American youth were no longer praising lyricism or creativity and instead they began idolizing money and fame. Rappers such as MC Hammer and Vanilla Ice became pop icons and unofficial representatives of the genre. Although the spot light was not upon such groups as Public Enemy and Rage Against the Machine, they would take the airwaves by force. These groups were among the few that remained as true hip-hop artists. Their conscious in-your-face lyrics could not be ignored. They spoke directly to the public and opened their eyes to the corruption of Government and society.Unfortunately groups like these have continued to slowly disappear from the media and commercial groups are taking over. Now you turn on your television and rap icons appear in almost all product commercials, promoting materialism. It has come to the point that rappers now own their own clothes line, perfume bottle, jewelry collection, hair products, toys, cosmetics line, and even umbrellas. The sad part about all of this is that the youth is actually buying into all this, making commercial hip-hop only richer and more influential. But again, at what phase does materialism translate into art? More than just art, hip-hop has been known to raise controversies within society. Its rebelliousness only adds to its appeal. It began with the birth of the “Gangsta Rap” era in which the west coast rap scene had emerged with a new, tougher image. MC Hammer and Vanilla Ice soon disappeared as their style of music was no longer desired by the mainstream. Gangsta Rap promoted hardcore imagery of gang violence, drug use, and the degradation of women. Parents and governmental figures alike spoke out against the music, accusing it of corrupting the youth.
The controversy only proved to increase record sales as youth had a lack of respect for authority, with songs like “F*ck the Police” being broadcast on television. Major record labels tried following this formula by signing more new artists to classify themselves under this sub-genre of Hip-Hop. Though it seemed as if Hip-Hop had lost its way around this period in time, the number of ORIGINAL artists was overwhelming. The Hip-Hop community was a melting pot of diverse styles ranging from Rakim to Bustah Rhymez. The reason I emphasize the word original is because originality takes genuine creativity, which many artists today now lack. This originality uses many techniques like assonance, alliteration, and rhyme. The beat used in hip-hop is viewed as original even though it’s sampled from other songs because it manages to create a completely different style.
An example of such talent was Grandmaster Flash. Not only could Flash cut from one record to the next without missing a beat, but he also added a new element. He could take phrases and sections of different records and play them over other records and therefore creating a new sound.It’s rare, but even now a days we’ll find a few hip-hop artists that rap about something worth mentioning. In 2004 for example, Immortal Technique, Dead Prez, Jadakiss, and Eminem took on an anti-Bush movement. They stood alone asking questions about what really happened in September 11. They weren’t afraid to ask questions, make bold statements, and offer no apologies.So as you can see hip-hop is argumentative and it has real issues rap about. It’s very odd to find “hip-hop” music these days that speaks about the concerns that are really taking place in the general public. Rapping about not being able to “dance when I’m in this place cuz you and your man is plannin to hate” and wearing “my pants below my waist” aren’t issues the world is seriously concerned about. Lyrics like these only promote an image of the typical ghetto person (which nowadays is a good thing to be) dressing like they’re poor and going to clubs/parties only to stand and watch. This way is supposed to make you look like you’re “chillin wit yo homies”. Unfortunately we all know that loitering only leads to fights because after a while of just staring out people are bound to get mad at you. All in all hip-hop music probably began declining in quality the moment the South began taking control over the air waves with their “Crunk” music. By this point neither the East nor West coast were even relevant anymore. Artists such as Lil’ Jon have now paved the way for more southern rappers to make their way on to radio and television. Every other week new dance moves are invented over essentially the same beat. Many sub-genres are created from this southern style of rap, such as “Snap” music, and “Hyphy”. The radio stations are paid to keep the same 20 songs on rotation, leaving no hope for any local artists of following their dreams.For all these reasons many have come to the conclusion that hip-hop is simply dead. Statements like these have enraged many southern rappers for their obvious exploitations of hip-hop music to make quick money. They call those who believe such things “haters” and defend their position by calling it another stage in the evolution of hip-hop. In that case it makes you wonder if maybe we should categorize rock under blues since that was where it originated. True hip-hop music should be seen as a form of art, and true art never dies. The same way that Leonardo Da Vinci’s paintings still live on to this day, true and inspiring hip-hop music will still be remembered years from now. Although dead, Tupac Shakur’s music shows evidence of how much skill and work goes into creating this music. However, these songs you currently hear on the radio will die out and soon no one will remember them. In that case, hip-hop isn’t dead. As other posers die along the way, true hip-hop will live on.

Miami Drivers (finished copy of first essay)

Miami, the city known for its beaches, disastrous hurricanes, its large Hispanic population, and its bad drivers. Taking a quick drive through the freeway and streets of Miami you see the usual. There’s the occasional car with it’s windows down and a small head of a dog or two sticking out with their tongues flying back and forth as they enjoy the warmth of the sun and the afternoon breeze, fighting to keep their eyes open in spite of the rushing wind. Every now and then you’ll also notice a small sign with tiny flowers on the side of the road with the words “drive safely” printed on them. These stand in memory of accident victims to remind us to watch our speed and be more aware of our surroundings. Like in every other place where technology has reached the people, Miami is flooded with cell phones and if you notice carefully you’d be surprised to see how many people are on their phones while they drive. Some have more advanced technology such as bluetooths, so it’s not weird to hear or see a person talking to themselves.It’s also not uncommon in a city with such a large Hispanic influence to hear the rhythm of Salsa and reggaeton music coming from passing drivers. The younger crowd, however, tends to blast hip-hop music as loud as their systems can go. By just standing next to their cars you feel your heart vibrate. Is this what it means “to feel the music in your heart”? Unfortunately as you head away from the city towards more suburban towns, the blasting of music can lead to being stopped by a cop and possibly getting ticketed. What exactly makes it legal here in Miami but not in other places? Is it perhaps the fact that larger cities are more tolerant towards freedom of expression than others? Are the driving conditions in Miami a product of this toleration? Whatever the case, people notice the difference between Miami and other cities. Repeatedly I’ve heard tourists mention how they were surprised to see how much “Miamians” suffer from road rage and “hypocritical driving”. On one occasion a friend from Tampa came by for the weekend and later approached me enthusiastically with her eyes showing the amazement she felt as she said, “Wow! People in Miami drive like crazy! I kept getting cut off and had to repeatedly stop abruptly. It feels as if everyone here is always in a hurry to get somewhere.” The reason for this is because on a busy bumper-to-bumper traffic day the evil side of drivers takes control. When the opportunity is given we’ll cut off other cars even if there’s not much space to squeeze in between them and the car in front. In my case, if the car I just cut off yells at me I tend to think “oh well punk you should have slowed down when you saw me put my turn signal on”. I call this “hypocritical driving” because as soon as we’re cut off we get angry, honk, scream out insults, or flash the drivers, believing that what they just did was completely wrong and rude. But why exactly is it that “Miamians” suffer from road rage? Well the reasons are many. First of all Miami is constantly being swarmed by new immigrants coming from all over the world but mostly Latin American countries. It is a fact that in these countries drivers take off on the streets as they please and laws aren’t that regularly enforced. Their police force is usually made up of corrupt unprofessional low class individuals that aren’t required to attend a police academy in order to work in the force. Because they get paid very little, it is easy to get away with a traffic violation by bribing an officer. In the making of the movie Once Upon a Time in Mexico, which was filmed in Mexico, the producers mention how they where astonished to see several cars being driven by children no older than twelve with their buddies in the back seat. To add to the astonishment they were all smoking cigarettes. This just goes to show how laid back authority is within the Latin American culture.As immigrants flood the streets of Miami, many being illegal, they drive around without a driver’s license because entering a DMV building would mean jeopardizing their stay in the United States. Like the republican senator, Tom McClintock once said, “Illegal immigrants are in direct violation of our federal immigration laws. These laws require them to be deported, not accommodated.” For fear of being deported but with the need to get around, the majority of these drivers learn to drive out on the streets by themselves, copying what they see around them. To begin with Miami is not the ideal place to take lessons from fellow drivers. Because these illegal immigrants can’t take the driver’s test they don’t bother to read the rule book and so they take on the streets without having any knowledge of all our traffic laws or the meaning of the road signs. Another reason why there’s a constant road rage is for the plain and simple fact that Miami is a large city with thousands of people driving on the streets at the same time. Every weekday morning is the same routine for us. From the residential areas a swarm of people head out their doors and start heading towards their schools and work even before the sun has had the chance to greet us good morning. The expressways are quickly flooded with drivers going north towards the most common job populated areas such as the Harbor, the area surrounding Miami International Airport, Downtown, and Broward, to mention a few. The only people that have it easy in the morning are those driving south to the more residential parts of the city. If you were to throw in a couple car accidents in with the morning traffic you’d have quite a large group of people that would end up getting late to work.However, one of the beautiful things of the city of Miami is how it has adapted to such diverse cultures from all over the world. Now, referring to the question I asked earlier, “Are larger cities more tolerant towards freedom of expression than others?” the answer is yes. Because Miami has been increasing in population as it works as a magnet for large amounts of people with their own unique ideas and life styles, it’s bound to let loose some of its conservative ideas in order to easily please all the people. This has allowed Miami to become a place where just about anyone can be accepted because you can act, think, and speak how ever you want. Just like Charles Darwin once said, “It is not the strongest of the species that survives, nor the most intelligent. It is the one that is the most adaptable to change.”Miami has therefore learned to adapt with the change in cultures. This is very noticeable in the streets of Miami. With the growing population people know that there will be major traffic jams so the city is up and running from very early in the morning to get the jobs done. Going back to Charles Darwin’s quote, as Miami residents begin to see the overcrowding in streets and rude drivers take the wheel, “Miamians” have found ways to adapt. To become stronger than your fellow driver you must become ruder and skilled at controlling the streets your way, and therefore, get to work on time. We also see many tourists year round and it is safe to say that they drive extremely slow as they take in the view, people, music, smells, and of course, heat. “Miamians”, however, do in fact seem to be in a hurry to get to their destination. This is because the weather in Miami is hot enough to not let you think twice about running in the rain with nothing more than a pair of undies. Therefore getting to one’s office building as soon as possible is extremely enticing.Also, toleration in large cities such as Miami creates a sort of domino effect. First off, Miami is home to many immigrants that come to the states looking for a job and better future for their families. Because of the diversity of ideas our conservative views have slowing been dying away and we don’t really care or rise arguments with a person or group of people for choosing a way of life different than our own. Instead we accept it and move on with our lives. Second, we also have in many ways the liberty of acting how we please and other people will treat us just as equally. Because the people that come here come with the purpose of gaining something, whether it is more money or freedom from oppression, people are all out with one thing in mind “every man for himself”. This then leads to people acting the way they do out in the streets. Indeed it is therefore a given that drivers will drive with only one thing in mind, “I must get to my destination on time and crush all those that stand in my way”. Perhaps Miami driving isn’t such a bad thing. If anything, it keeps you more alert and pushes you to become a “skilled” driver. The atmosphere in the streets of our beautiful city is very lively. Whether there’s a feeling of stress or sound of Salsa music in the air, the streets are crowded with people going home, work, parties, church, beach, etc. The best part about it though is that here the people move together as one, learning from one another and creating a completely new different way of driving, which then contributes to a new culture. The culture of “Miamians”.

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